Thursday, September 9, 2010

A View of Berry Mountains on Tuesday Morning, September 7, 2010

Golden foilage brushed
the tips of Berry Mountains
meeting autumn skies.

Green's grip is released
as summer stretches to rest
from her warm watch soon.

2 comments:

  1. Do you think the different tenses between the stanzas is okay?

    The first one describes the view.

    The second explains it.

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  2. I like it!
    I get the picture no matter the tense!

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